Monday, May 24, 2010

Connor's Camp Reflection

I felt good because I like going on camp and trying new things. I was worried about the water slide because it looked really big.

It was the water slide that gave me a shock. Before I went on the water slide, I was a bit worried because it looked like I was going to fall off, but after it I really liked it because I like to get wet. I would really like to go again.

The flying fox looked fun when people were going on it. I thought I should go on but then I saw the line it was huge, so I stayed on the water slide but this time, I was not worried or nervous and I really really liked it and I wish I could go again.

Archery has been one thing that I’ve always wanted to do. It is harder than I thought.

I fell good about camp and it was worthwhile, I would love to go again.

12 comments:

  1. Connor, it's great to read your reflective recount and see that you overcame your fears and just had a go. Well done!
    Mrs Muston

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  2. Hi Connor, I enjoyed reading your camp reflection and learning about how you had a go at everything. It's great to hear how you won't be quite so worried next time. Do you think you will try archery again? You might find that it would be easier, next time. It was good to hear that you had such a terrific time.

    Mrs Leydon

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  3. Connor, I really enjoyed reading your camp reflection - it was very long!!!! Well done buddy. It sounds like you had a great time.

    Mrs Magrath

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  4. So glad you enjoyed camp so much AND you able to write about with all of those reflective comments. Keep up the great writing Connor!
    Miss C

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  5. See Connor, you should always proofread your work! I meant to say..
    So glad you enjoyed camp so much AND you were able to include all of those reflective comments. Keep up the great writing Connor!
    Miss C :)

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  6. good descriptive words connor
    you must be glad that you had a expectorants at camp
    you should have mentioned the beach

    Chaice runciman

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  7. SARA
    nice connor i like ur story and ur nouns

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  8. Wow Connor you were honest and used good adjectives and that is great!Next-time you should explain a bit better though but great-work!!!!!

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  9. Great adjectives and i like how you were talking about your feelings.

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  10. Denise- Lewis Miller's MumJune 2, 2010 at 9:46 PM

    Great recount Connor! I enjoyed reading this because you were honest and open about your experience and fears and it was written in a very readable and natural way. You are going to go far in life if you always take up the challenge and enjoy trying new things as you did on this camp. I hope the awesome memories stay with you for a long time!

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  11. Denise -Lewis' mumJune 2, 2010 at 9:52 PM

    I really enjoyed your account of your time on camp Connor! It was well written and you were open and honest about your experiences and fears. You will go far in life if you take on new challenges as you did on camp. I hope you have lots of cool memories!

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  12. Connor, i loved how you were honest about how things scared you but you decided to give it a go anyway, i am very proud of you :0) I am also very happy that you were able to share all your fun events on this blog, what a fantastic idea!!!
    Go you!!
    Trina Dassler (Connors mum)

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